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the zhush: read it out loud

when you read a rough draft out loud to yourself, you find opportunities to break long sentences into short ones. if you feel yourself physically out of breath, the sentence is way too long.

hint: it’s not about the sentence. it’s about the thought. if you’re out of breath, it means the thought is too clunky, too long, too much.

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